I love you

                 Roses are red ,Violets are blue. I am in love and falling for you. Every day I look in the bible. You are my idol.  When ever I see you you make me smile . I love you.I love you.Don’t  you realize . Iwish you are here with me now.  But you are not here , for you have moved on.

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5 Responses to I love you

  1. olivia6 says:

    Hi Saffron,
    This is a wonderful piece of work. Although, do remember to place spaces beetween the full-stop, and the next sentance, and oh, a tiny mistake of ‘Iwish’ .
    Otherwise, its a wonderfull poem.
    Well done.

  2. jessa says:

    Hi Saffron,
    I love it. It makes me feel proud and lucky to know you, thank you for brightening my day!

  3. rosalee says:

    Hi Saffron
    wonderful piece of work your poem makes me so proud of you and I hope I see all your wonderful work again and good bye.

  4. rosalee says:

    Saffron I can’t stop reading this brilliant piece of work keep on writing .

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