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The story is very nice, and I think that you did a great job!
What a beautiful opening. I loved your use of similes and metaphors here. ‘Leaves dancing gracefully’ is a wonderful image. I am glad the family learned their lesson in the end. To improve, there were a few errors with spelling and speech marks. Always double check. Keep up the effort. Well done!
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