memories of dancing (flashback)

He walked into his new room. A tiny tear slowly drifted down his cheek. As he sat on his bed, he thought of his brother. He opened the desk drawer. He took out all his work and papers. Then, he saw the most precious thing to him now. It was his brother’s hat. He took out his brother’s hat and at that very moment it all came back to him, the time he and his brother danced together.

“I am not sure if we can beat them Jerome,” spoke his brother. Jerome and his brother were about to face the biggest challenge of their lives. They both walked to the other

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One Response to memories of dancing (flashback)

  1. kube6 says:

    Myron wonderful piece of work. I like the last bit when Jerome put his brothers hat on and saw him in the mirror. There was a part were you could of put an apostrophe in Jerome’s name. While I was talking about apostrophes just done one in Jerome’s name and again. Myron great work. Excellent.

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