My Diary

 Dear Diary,
          Hi, I’m Alfie.  Jessa’s my owner and I feel lucky in my new house. My owner is gentle and gives me treats every day. When I sleep, I curl up into a ball however sometimes I sleep on my back. I enjoy looking and sniffing around my cage especially because I have a lot of equipment to use.

Before Jessa has dinner, I would hide from her then when she finds me I would scratch my ear and I will make a loud noise which means ‘Hahaha! I scared you!’

I remember when I was carried into a large room by Jessa and she stroked me gently. I love being stroked especially if the person stroking me has warm hands. Then Jessa’s dad came and took me away from her then he tickled my ear unexpectedly but I didn’t mind.  I have enjoyed my day today, because I have been handled by warm hands.

Got to go and collect some food!

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4 Responses to My Diary

  1. Jenny says:

    I love it…. I’m sure that Alfie is really happy in his new home…

  2. anna says:

    Hi Jessa,
    I really enjoyed reading your (Hamster’s)diary. I loved the use of wow words like ‘unexpectedly’. I also liked the ending ‘ got to go and collect some food’. It made me laugh.
    You forgot to put a comma in the middle -however,sometimes, and, stroked,especially.
    Anyway I enjoy reading your work. Keep it up!

  3. jowy6 says:

    That is a nice story. I like the story because it was informal and it showed that the hamster was happy where it lived and how it was treated. You could have added a little bit more of how it felt but good work.

  4. dylan says:

    That was great, I liked all of it because the picture reminds me of my Aunty’s hamster but sadly it died. So the hamster was writing a diary, that was nice. Always remember that story it belongs to you.

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