100wc by Jessa

Tim and Moby had gone round and round the immortal forest for two days whilst some annoying cheeky animals circle around them stealing their precious food!

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One Response to 100wc by Jessa

  1. Megan says:

    What an interesting piece of writing Jessa! I love your use of words such as ‘immortal’ and ‘humongous’ – they reall make the story more interesting and easier to imagine for the reader. Good work. 🙂

    Megan

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