Dear Mr Desmond Tiny,
I know you don’t read a lot, but I would be really grateful if you could read this letter from me. I can guarantee you that
A very very interesting idea here. Is this a letter to a character from the Darren Shan books? You have really told him what you think of him in a very direct manner! Excellent. I really like the line about you having great DNA – very amusing.
Do you think he will grant your wishes after the way you have attacked his character? One minor point – I thin the word ’till’ on the fourth from last line would read better as ‘for’. Please reply to my comments.
Yes Mr Ruddy, you are right about the ’till’. And I just would like to explain a bit about Desmond Tiny. Desmond Tiny is a really powerful man who can move in time, kill people and then bring them back to life and even travel to the underworld. He uses all his powers to create chaos and bloodshed- he’s quite evil and everyone’s scared of him- they’re scared that he will take their soul and never let them rest in peace. He loves to see other people being evil or bad and is really interested in them.
One more thing I would like to mention- I love all the Darren Shan books. He is just the best author in the world!
this is a really fantastic piece of work. I like the way you presented it and the use of wow words. This letter is brilliant. I do agree with Mr Ruddy though, ‘for’ would be better than ’till’. Other than that a great piece of work. Keep blogging and commenting, people would appreciate it, especially from you Julia.
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