100word challenge

Tim and Moby were explorers. They went in search for a

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2 Responses to 100word challenge

  1. clare says:

    Hi Dylan,

    I like the way you used speech marks for example when you said “At last mobey we found it “. It really made a diffrence to you work and make it effective Well done. I also like how you contuined the story from the start and said st the end what they found it really shocked me. The thing you could include is using diffrence senctence openers like doing word it would make it more intreasting . Over all well done and keep up the good work.

    by clare

    • dylan says:

      Thank you for commenting on my 100wc. Its really hard to do the 100wc I couldn’t even think at the end of the last sentence because I wanted to write more but I went over 100 words.

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