My Day(new)

Today was a great day. In the morning, we went to church and celebrated the Queen’s Diamond Jubilee. It was a long but very good mass. After that finished, my family went to a Chinese restaurant with great food, for example, the spring rolls, the spicy chicken and the noodles.

After that, we all went home feeling full. It was a very very relaxing day for me. I liked every bit of it especially because the whole point of going to the Chinese restaurant was for me to feel confident about getting

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3 Responses to My Day(new)

  1. chantelle says:

    A very positive diary Kube. I loved your use of commers. N ext time try to add more figurtive language. Well Done.

  2. Alessia says:

    Hi Kube,
    The Jubille was great ,but I watched on TV and the chines food ,delicius.
    I am going to have the S.A.T.S nex year and I am very excided.
    How was the S.A.T.S?

  3. Shaleem says:

    Hello Kube
    You wrote in time order and you explaned what you did and why.That’s kind of like what I did on the Queen’s Juiblee I ate Chinese it was great but it wasn’t the best day of my life because I aint really to keen on the Queen.I really enjoyed it made me want more.Next time please write more.Please come and visit Welbourne Primary year 5 blog.

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